Teddy the Porcupine by Louis

Teddy
Munch munch bang " ow what was that? " I exclaimed. It was pitch black, I couldn't even see my own fur. After about a hour of lying down dead still I tried to wriggle around but I couldn't; something was holding me down. At last I heard a noise that sounded like rushing leaves. Above me a door opened and in came light then a human face came into view . Two enormous hands reached down and lifted me out. Only then did I discover that I had been in a trap. I struggled  trying to break free of the strong grip. Another figure appeared with a corn cob. I grabbed it off him and nibbled on it ravenously. The human tried to grab it off me. "It's not yours it's mine!" I complained.