Lantern in Fiji

Tmorrow I am going to Fiji. We are going to lit of one    latin  we dobikoz   wewottosiedamisijto  jak.

Tomorrow I am going to Fiji. We are going to let of a lantern.We do this because we want to send a message to Jack who was Dads dog.

Samuel is sik

Today Samuel is away because he is not feling vry     well.  por Samuel.

Mummy

I  like  my mummy cooz  she githes lot othe cddl.   

Captain

my dad got me a captn 

museum

I went to the  Museum. On Sunday. I saw a big dinosaur. I got a bird to play with i'ts small i'ts made with green cardboard.  

Eiffel Tower

Like a solider standing tall guarding Paris, the Eiffel tower defends the people.  In sunlight the metal gold giant sways to the song of the breeze.  Parisians glaring up at it . Silently the monolith shines in golden light.  How long will I stay? It asks.  It’s the guardian of Paris.  You can see it from Genoble.

Evie and Sam A

Like a giant solider seeking safety.  The Eiffle tower feels protected.  Under the horizon the steel lady sways through the beams of light.  Metal glow’s like a thousand shooting stars reading up to space.  Iron shatters in the morning light.  How long will I stand here? It wonders.  It’s Paris’ beast, you can see it from Burgandy.

Molly

Like a centurion watching over Paris it guards the city.  In the twilight sky it looks like a giant made of century old iron..  Where is Gustave, my maker? It wonders.  It’s the beast of Paris, you can see it from Burdandy.

Lizzie

Like a Greek solider swaying in the horizon, the Eiffle tower is getting tired.  In the moonlight, the iron gets weaker, the steal planks are weaving like snakes trying to get back to their eggs.  Who are those strangers? She wonders.  It’s a beast spying on Paris.

Fergus

Like a solider on guard, the Eiffle Tower is watching all the people in Paris.  In the sunlight the steel starts to burn and it looks like it is melting down the tower.  The beams are like a slippery snake, they are all yellow and gold.  Gurders fight like stipey snakes competing for space.  How long have I been standing here it asks.  Its an iron giant looking over Paris.  You can see it from Provonce.

Annika

Like a solider facing the sunset the Eiffle tower relaxes and sighs.  The steel shatters into dark shadows.  The beautiful black beast says I’m the iron lady.  It’s Paris’s knight, you can see it from Nise.

Julia

River Seinne

These pieces of writing describe the River Seinne in Paris.  The idea was to “over alliterate”, use personification and metaphor

The Seinne is scattered with shells from the shore.  It slithers silently to

San-Sur-Marne for special seaweed water.  Shameful sandy creeks shatter painfully onto it’s scaly slimy back.  Sharp seagulls beaks squeak softly on the shore.

Molly, Julia and Logan

The River Seinne is safe and sound. Shifting along the slippery city it goes. It shatters on the shore. It’s a big Snake curling around the Eiffel Tower.

Aniika and Lizzie

The seinne is a basilisk.
Slithering through the shining salty water. Lonely. secretly the seagulls scream and shout like insane lunatics.
The serpent weaves it's way to the sabazan.

Fergus and Sam

The seinne is a basilisk!  It slithers through shelly corridors.  The seagulls shriek at it’s sight, flapping their wings and soaring away.  In moonlight it winds up the Eiffel Tower.  It’s a snake wrapped around a pole in Paris.  The snake acts like a doormat.  It rings a bell at a door and it runs around town scaring it’s prey.

Evie and Katie

The river shimmers in the sunlight.

Like a sharp shell corridor slipping into the upper world and slithering up the Eiffel Tower.

Paige and Charlie